Captive of Fortune

Damn. What a shame. I was actually enjoying this series. For the first handful of Chapters, this was an adventure comparable in quality to its predecessor, Trial of the Demon Hunter. Sure, there were some flaws: the music felt a little lazier this time 'round (as if some of the weaker tracks had been saved for a game other than the first); there were definitely more typos than previously; and at least one minor plot-hole reared its ugly head (in which I gained a "Ring of Owls" - which gave me a brief yet enigmatic experience - then seemingly lost said Ring of Owls when I attained a Ring of Lions...which proceeded to give me the EXACT SAME enigmatic experience)! There's also a totally gratuitous attempt to get some romance happenin' in one or two parts, but in all fairness I suspect that's more of a Choice of Games thing than the author's personal preference (one can only hope). So far, so forgivable. Then I reached what I assumed was the climax, or darned near enough...and...

I was fine with the errors in the first chapter, but this time I guess it just felt sloppy. Game allows you to go to 0 health and be fine, it used my character name for my imp's name, etc.

Definitly too short, it's more like a chapiter than a real story.