This story is unbelievable. And sadly I mean that in the literal sense here. None of the characters feel like actual people. Everyone's just a bit too exaggerated to be believable. Every single characters core trait is exaggerated to a point where they don't feel like characters, they feel like vessels for drama and excuses for sh*t happening just to progress the story or create more drama. While yes, obviously people are never perfect, I think the constant setups in this VN about the way people interact with each other is so far removed from reality that it becomes difficult for me to actually root for anyone. It's so difficult to believe that Marina would be that stupid and that forgetful. (Also, really? "Nickel" being corrected to Quarter by Amber because she doesn't understand what 1/4th of something is??) The scene where she screams to not be treated "like a f*cking child" is not even believable because she's done nothing but ACT like a child for the entire game. It has no weig...

Wonderful lil story! The dynamic between Amber and Marina is fantastic and seeing them grow together in their misadventures was a lot of fun and real charming. Mostly a light hearted and fun adventure with some good tension here and there, can be a little rough around the edges a couple places but overall loved my time with them!