Loot Line

It's not horrible, but as an English language VN, it is poorly written. The spelling and grammatical errors break the immersion, and the steamy scenes lack the necessary heat to overcome it. I will never understand why these companies don't contract an editor, or at least run the text through an AI. Even Microsoft Word could fix most of these mistakes. If they had, I likely wouldn't have returned the game for a refund.

It's not a big like, but I think that some of the more recent reviews haven't done it justice. Setting is just plain silly, but that is apparently how this dev like to roll. IMO story and writing is decent, but apparently other English majors are not content. Scenes, characters, and story is ok. My biggest beef with this is that it seems like a step back and a bit more rushed that Lust City 1/2 - from Lust City 1 to 2, there was progress, but this seems like a step back. While previous games from this dev had a proper ending, we are in the 'chapter 2' territory here. I will probably buy chapter 2 when it comes,, but am a bit sad that dev is taking a step back instead of forward. If you haven't tried them, give Lust City 1/2 a go.