Dreamy Planet

This is a short but still overwritten yuri story about feelings of helplessness, powerlessness, love, and friendship. There are multiple phrases, similes, and metaphors throughout that try to leverage the two characters being nurses by using medical situations or health issues that largely fall flat. As a medical professional myself I thought this story would at least somewhat delve into the interpersonal issues that may have led to Haruka leaving her job, but they're just hinted at. This is genuinely a very deep issue that I've personally yet to see explored in almost any piece of media. I thought with this description talking about the protagonist being worn down by their demanding job that we would get more than just "I wasn't a very good nurse, I quit five years ago" which was repeated a few times. Despite the descriptions of medical issues that I think are intended to appear as how a character sees them, they're simply narration to the reader, sometimes even about the protagonis...

short and sweet, very atmospheric for what it is. the music is eerie at times and suits the setting. for what it is, and having gotten it on sale, it's decent. however, the writing feels average and absurdly long in some aspects for no reason (focusing on the environment and minor details that don't amount to anything). there was a lot of potential to further flesh out characters, their backgrounds, careers, and family details, though such was not present. honestly, the story feels as though it was written in a rush and left unfinished, and it leaves too much for players to interpret on their own.

A roller coaster of a story. It tore me a new heart-hole. Worth the money.

A very nice read! The story was enjoyable and rather more realistic than usual. I enjoyed the roller-coaster up until the very end. Once again, relatable flawed characters which, for their short appearance, are well-rounded. Watch them extend a hand in this day-depicting Visual Novel!